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LordSputnik
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2021-03-07 11:38

The Good: Excellent writing quality! This is very much a slice-of-life in my opinion which is a nice break from plotting, scheming, and backstabbing found in most romance novels. Characters are very well thought out. The Bad: Release rate could use a bit of work... I don't really have enough chapters to work with to give a fair review so I will add this to my "Come back and check on later" list. I feel like this is just a bunch of high school kids acting like high school kids, not necessarily a bad thing, but I feel like the only antagonist is the stereotypical whiny stuck up rich girl that despite her twisted personality has friends. The Neutral: The MC has it very easy these first few chapters. Not really a bad thing, but it can become boring without any sort of conflict. Just a thought. Romance is not my thing so I try to be unbiased about that as much as possible.

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