Review Detail of Eggy_does_writing in The World Undone

I've read four chapters so far and I think the story is really good! My favorite part was how the author describes the surroundings. I also enjoyed the character interactions and how fluid the dialogue was. The only reason why I decided not to give this five stars is because of the grammar issues. There weren't many of those in the chapters I've read but it still got in the way of the story. Overall, this book is really great so far!