Review Detail of mssuigeneris in The World Undone

A fantasy to look forward to. Writing - author has great grammar and he crafts his words very well, giving a vivid imagery to his readers Updates - completed already as per labeled, so no qualms on this Development - rather fast paced, so fast that the first chapter is overwhelming already Characters - in reference to the aforementioned, a lot of characters were introduced in the very first chap. I can't easily distinguish one from the other, apart from Felix and Astera World - again, great imagery If I may suggest, you should add an auxiliary chapter describing more the system behind this novel's setting and the attributes of each faction / character