Review Detail of Zhylle_Bugay in Marvel's Mutant Gamer (Being rewritten)

Item: Marvel's Mutant Gamer (Being rewritten)
Rating: 4.2

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Zhylle_BugayLv23yrZhylle_Bugay

I will be straightforward: Writing quality- the grammar is good and there are some wording that is wrong. (like wish->Vish) Updating stability- your fanfic is just starting can't say anything about that. Story development- same reason as updating stability. Character design- well I like the MC World background- It's Marvel what do you expect.? Well I think it's a good start (I'll edit this **** after many chapters I think?? Or I will make a new one.) Peace out ~Bugay

Marvel's Mutant Gamer (Being rewritten)

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Thank you, Bugay. The words that are spelled with a 'V' instead of 'W' or 'Wh' are that way because Kurt is supposed to have a german accent. Same with 'Z' instead of 'Th.' This is my take on it :D

3yr

Zhylle_BugayLv2Zhylle_Bugay

Ohhhh

3yr

Pimple_Face_13Lv4Pimple_Face_13

Yeah I was confused as well

Zhylle_Bugay:Ohhhh

3yr

BreezyNovelsLv5BreezyNovels

Who is the romantic interest? I really don't want to read this because of the gamer powers and mix of cinematic and comic universes. But I also really want some marvel romance fanfics, so I would like to know who the romantic interest is before I read.

fallingstar:Thank you, Bugay. The words that are spelled with a 'V' instead of 'W' or 'Wh' are that way because Kurt is supposed to have a german accent. Same with 'Z' instead of 'Th.' This is my take on it :D

3yr

Awesome22Lv11Awesome22

Z->Th is mostly correct but V instead of W or Wh is not. I never heard any German having problems pronouncing the W or Wh in English and I'm from Germany

fallingstar:Thank you, Bugay. The words that are spelled with a 'V' instead of 'W' or 'Wh' are that way because Kurt is supposed to have a german accent. Same with 'Z' instead of 'Th.' This is my take on it :D

3yr