Review Detail of Aks_ in A Supernatural Apocalypse

Ok so after reading the first few chapters I could tell that this is something unique unlike some of the other post-apocalyptic novels though I found that since it was a 3rd pov written book, there were a few details that could be described better. The phrasing could also be improved, while it's not bad... I believe it could be better, I would also like if you explained the surroundings in more detail to bring a better sense of imagination.