Keep up the good work. dont listen to those morons your doing great. your also doing great at making me cry. if I have anything to criticize then please no more sadness its breaking my heart. Emotional stories are my weakness and make me sad easily so please tell me this is all the sadness? All in all I love your story your doing great. Character development pretty good. Though a little creativity or originality with the wishes would've been nice but I like your choices. Still I love what your doing and good to see more.
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LIKEYour welcome, you deserve the praise for all your doing. you work hard on this so you deserve to hear the truth. I honestly rated it with what I believe should be the quality of your story so I think I made a fair judgement.
FanfictionLover:Thanks, appreciate it.