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2020-10-29 11:04

I was reading chapter 22 but I had to stop reading the story. I like the story and everthing but I hate how Noah is so mean to Raine, and I mean in the way how they get mad at each other then she still listens to everything he says or how she gets frustrated but still helps him because he is “stupid”. I mean I know he still can’t get over his ex but to not listen to those how care about you then still do stuff that hurts you... thats just not nice. I love but dislike how Raine still likes him and I think it is really sweet that she trys to help but honestly I don’t get why she still trys after all the times she gets frustrated and mad at him... I know I was ranting but I get it but I really don’t get it... This story just gives to much emotion of frustration to me that I just can’t keep reading. But honestly after all that I know this will be a good story to other people and I hope they enjoy it. I just wanted something light hearted but I got frustration and I just can’t.

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Oh, sorry about Raine. About her attitude, you know she's a little bit exaggerated about things. She gets frustrated for a few things but things we're being improve for the remaining chapters and I hope you'll still read it through. But anyway, thanks for still reading it.

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