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i want to start of by saying thank you to the author for writing this, it's a fantastic story so far and I'm really looking forward to how it progresses. secondly, I want to apologize for skipping over this novel several times during my hunt for new omegaverse novels, it deserves way more recognition than it gets and i hope it gets it soon. The story it self is progressing nicely, and the characters are both believable and fleshed out. I especially like that while yuliang is certainly a loud mouth annoying brat(not without good reason), he has a softer side, and how through the writing it's shown that acting like he does isn't necessarily a good thing. thanks again for the novel, and i hope this review motivates you too keep writing more awesome chapters. **: maybe changing the synopsis and or the picture can help reele people in

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Thank you so much. I really appreciate it. I will definitely look into adjusting it to make it more appealing. Sorry for the infrequent updates, I'm currently swamped with uni right now, but seeing your comment has been motivating so maybe I'll be able to make some time to writ soon :)