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Nicky_Raymond
Nicky_RaymondLv13yr
2021-06-07 04:57

I love the story setting and theme , it started with a mistery but had a good ending the characters were all nice you even kept the suspense there was a little mistake here and there but it only added to the story I look forward to reading more of your books thanks for the short story

Who Are You

Oemar_danoes
4.7
10 Chs

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Oemar_danoes
Oemar_danoesAuthor

Thank you, I admire that.

3yr
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Oemar_danoes
Oemar_danoesAuthor

Hello everyone, this is oemar_danoes ( Author of Who Are You ). Thanks for reviewing and reading my story. Right now I'm announcing my new novel is called Facing Into The Sky. The story is about social-entertainment issues. Many volumes that will be released ( I don't know how much, but it's okay to create some new stories in the same theme. ) The first chapter of Facing Into The Sky will be released in October 2020.

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SamsaraWithWords
SamsaraWithWordsLv14

This is a nice romance novel. The author has a good grasp of drama and emotion. If you're the type of person that wants to read a book while crying and smiling at the same time, give this a shot :)

4yr
tuba_san
tuba_sanLv3

The message of this novel is very sweet and I personally agree with it a lot. I think the mysterious way in which this novel is written is a peculiar feature limited to the **** genre. A lot of **** genre based stuff features a coming of age story or just a confusing period in a person's life, so this is usually reflected in the writing. And this novel actually has a mystery going on so this type of writing fits even better. I've read the whole thing and based on the plot itself I think the story is too rushed. This might be one of the earlier projects by the author, so writing short is good but if the author ever wants to revise this novel into a lengthier one, I believe it has a lot of potential for that. There are several issues with the grammar and the word usage, but I think it can be resolved with practice and gradual learning. I know English isn't the first language for many writers on here (including myself), so all I can say is that there is a lot of room for improvement. Keep working hard.

4yr
The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv11

Reveal spoiler

4yr
imagineTishaD
imagineTishaDLv12

After reading this book, I feel so incomplete. I want this novel to end Never Ever!!! Dear Author, Can you please write a volume 2 for this novel. I love this amazing novel.

4yr
Kathie_Kav
Kathie_KavLv2

A great novel with nice romance. An amzing work, author. The author's work is really well done and admirable..A nice novel with a great story.

4yr
bjalex
bjalexLv1

I really like this book and it's plot! To be honest I've never heard of anyone talking about Jakarta as the place for a book so it's really interesting to see people talking about Jakarta

4yr
marichat_nettenoir
marichat_nettenoirLv11

I highly recommend this book. Kudos to the writer on such a genius idea for a book. This novel has highly interested me. [img=update][img=recommend]

4yr
TanY
TanYLv2

The story is great. The author did a awesome job in making the plot and characters. It was worth reading. I would love to recommend it to others.

4yr
Gourmet_DAO
Gourmet_DAOLv7

Unusually short chapters. But thanks to this, the novel reads easily. The chapters are full of wit. Interesting title page. Hopefully the author can keep the pace of updates. I wish him success in his work.

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