Item: Who Are You
Rating: 5
Author: ReinaRay729

ReinaRay729Lv34yr

2020-09-03 01:45

Great short story, very interesting. I love how even though the story is short Kate develops and grows. Love the story ending and the reasoning behind it all, highly recommended.

Who Are You

Oemar_danoes

4.7

10 Chs

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Oemar_danoesAuthor

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Hello everyone, this is oemar_danoes ( Author of Who Are You ). Thanks for reviewing and reading my story. Right now I'm announcing my new novel is called Facing Into The Sky. The story is about social-entertainment issues. Many volumes that will be released ( I don't know how much, but it's okay to create some new stories in the same theme. ) The first chapter of Facing Into The Sky will be released in October 2020.

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