Review Detail of sir_impeccable in Packing Up My Work

Oh my God! If you are not reading this book, then what the heck are you waiting for? Seriously, WTH? This book will make your blood boil, the actions are surreal and the descriptions combined make it feel like an action movie in the mind. The powerful use of words and mix of thoroughly selected powers and abilities with amazing personalities.. Like OMG! I AM BREATHLESS HERE! MORE... Author needs to work on his punctuations, especially in first chapter. Some unnecessary commas, wrong capitalisation etc. The speech sentences is not well defined from the thought sentences. And some paragraphs are mumbled up- Please fix it. (Usually, we can ignore this but with punctuation overlooked errors, makes it harder. World building is fine, Punctuation and capitalisation didn't allow me enjoy those narrations. Story development iss OMG AMAZIN!!! MAN... I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEE...