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GreblemLv64yr
2020-08-30 12:55

The first section was great, the story was well developed and the characters were mostly accurate to their originals. However, in the second section, a Spartan suddenly went from badass solider to a complete gossip, giving away a ridiculous amount of information to enemies who captured him. So I couldn't read anymore after that as it was ruining my view of Spartans.

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Im sorry to hear that but if your talking about the arrival of Kamino, I'd suggest 2 more chapters for you. If that doesn't change your mind I'm sorry to see you leave!

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