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no i took everything off patreon and posted here as a mass release a while ago
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I think the premise of the story is pretty good. But I feel like the process of how we went from Death---->System----> War Is kind of sloppy causing the entire first chapter to lose some rhythm of what could be a great chapter. I'm not how to fix it but I do think something could be done to fix the flow of the story.
Final Fantasy 14
ive also have 2 chapters currently finished with a third on the way. they are currently only released on patreon but im hoping ill have them ready fir WN released soon.
Miralukan. Highly sensitive and "Rare" race
He has not
im going to try a FF14 with a knight themed so far i have 2.5 chapters. One completely done and the other is some reworking and being rewritten.
This might be another thing. I didn't really consider this. Thank you for the outlook.
Extremely sorry for this. Maybe in the future it'll return but I dont want to make a promise im not sure i'll be able to keep at the moment.