Review Detail of mssuigeneris in Fleur-de-Lis

This one has a good start. It surely baited me with that first chapter. As an anime fan, who happens to have a taste for shoujo genre, i found the story quite interesting. Author has good grasp of grammar, however, I can't help but notice the repetitions of words used in the storytelling. What I mean is, the character expressions and adjectives used to describe it are quite generic. This isn't a bad thing, but I think I'll have a better reading experience when the vocabulary of a book is immense. Please don't be discouraged on this, coz your work is really good. This is something you can improve on. Kudos!