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Aislinn_Jasper
Aislinn_JasperLv34yr
2020-08-12 12:14

I actually binge read all the chapters and when I saw to be continued I was like Why?? Well, the whole plot is amazing I'm loving your book so far. One thing I would like to add is if you could add some descriptive paragraphs in your chapters. Like, you never told the readers how the school looks like or how the house or room of Fleur looks like. It would make readers visualize the things and I think that is the most important thing in a novel. Over all you book is just amazing ;)

Fleur-de-Lis

heyimliane
4.7
10 Chs

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heyimliane
heyimlianeAuthor

Thank you so muucchh! Your review is really helpful!

4yr
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heyimliane
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Hi guys, Author here! I am going to shamelessly give my novel a 5 star lol. But I’m not here to just do that. I want to inform all the Kofies or readers that I might not give new update for a while because my novel will undergo editing, it may be a major editing so some words, grammar, description and details will change but of course, the plot will never ever change or be replaced. The editing may take few weeks but I assure you, I will do my best to make my novel even better. Have a nice day/afternoon/night everyone!! Also... Thank you for 6K in just a month! I love you all!! 🥺

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Aeolius
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I don't really read romance but... I don't understand! The first chapter made me feel all giddy and ****! The next thing I knew I kept reading till the end. It's interesting alright. I'll give you that. The story flows well and this type of first person narration makes it soft for my eyes. Just hope there were more chapters TT

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HappyChills
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Usually I’m not into romance but this caught my eye... really interesting and great to see a story like this around here. Needs some recognition!

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White_Falcon21
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Volteair
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This story definitely has some chills and suspense building up slowly. At some points, you think you know who the unknown yandere killer is, and then the next everything changes on you and you're not sure. I can't wait until the eventual reveal of who the killer is and how she's going to be free from them. Loved this and can't wait for more!

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Elise_Aigasaki
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I love it! I love yandere stories and this is my new fave! I love how well-written it is. There is also a mysterious vibe in it that I love so much. I really enjoyed reading it!

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madskie00017
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I am a romance fanatic. I love the scenes which make your heart flutter. The plot of the story is weaved beautifully. It has so much potential to be honest! Keep writing! More Please!

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SamsaraWithWords
SamsaraWithWordsLv14

A breath of fresh air. This novel reminds me of the series You on Netflix where you're not sure if it's a romance or a horror/thriller. Really interesting premise. Great job author!

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Prestine_Caverly
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I’m your reader from Wattpad and this book is 10x better in Webnovel! I’m a certified Kofi! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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mssuigeneris
mssuigenerisLv3

This one has a good start. It surely baited me with that first chapter. As an anime fan, who happens to have a taste for shoujo genre, i found the story quite interesting. Author has good grasp of grammar, however, I can't help but notice the repetitions of words used in the storytelling. What I mean is, the character expressions and adjectives used to describe it are quite generic. This isn't a bad thing, but I think I'll have a better reading experience when the vocabulary of a book is immense. Please don't be discouraged on this, coz your work is really good. This is something you can improve on. Kudos!

4yr
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