WARNING: The story is rated 18+ that contained r*pe and gore, and the book has a slow but solid progress of the story. Please, read with caution. The story has an excellent background and foundation. As far as I have been reading until chapter 80, I didn’t see any big plot hole that might ruin the novel yet. So, you can rest assure that you won’t find any big inconsistency within the novel. As for the other elements, such as characters’s feelings, dialogue, and decisions, I also don’t see any inapropriate thing ‘for’ the author had made them feel alive and consistent for their own chain of actions. I like these aspects a lot. Last but not least, the power system, currently, It hasn’t been shown to us 100% yet, I think that it’s only 10% or 20% that has been shown so far and it contains taste and smell of other famous novels. For example, The Second Coming of Gluttony and Lord of the Mysteries. So, if you are a fan of those 2 famous novels, you CANNOT miss this book. I give you 5 stars, mY pReCiouS!! ***Please create a Discord group and Patr.eon***

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The pace of this novel is so f**king slow, you could cut more than half of the words and the sotry wouldn’t lose anything significant. It’s not bad, but it needs heavy editing and cutting

Story pacing is way too slow. MC comes fully equiped with leadership qualities while he is a loner and hasn't been in a situation where he was required to lead. Too many side characters that its impossible to get a sense of connection with everyone, which would cause the story attention to be divided thus aggravating the pacing problem.

It is actually pretty good so far. I liked the beginning far better than the grand duelist, another book made by the author. The premise is basically a demi-god or inhuman being who was the writer of fate in the future, dies and reincarnates. He is trying to reach the apex of what he once was. Or this is the premise of what I can tell.

The story seems to be some type of darker imitation of second coming of gluttony and some other novels. The plot and the personality of the main character are always being forced. World building is decent though. Grammar is also ok but there are quite a few typos here and there and needs some editing. Well tldr: give it a try but it mostly caters to a niche group of people.

Para que se hagan una idea de lo lento que va este libro, por el capítulo 90 recién va pasando un solo día y recién salen de una prueba que tendría que haber terminado en menos de la mitad de esos capitulos,un arco donde presentan a tres demonios que ni siquiera vamos a recordar solo para salir de una puta prueba que dura como 15 capitulos

Holy shit your MC has to be the most altruistic dipshit I’ve ever read. Holy **** man.... he’s worse than the cliche fantasy white knight saving every damsel they come across. I could tolerate it if it was for a specific purpose and enable him to have a better chance at survival. And if it’s within reason, But it’s obvious he’s just bending over backwards for a bunch of ungrateful assholes. You should change his name to Shirou Emiya

This novel should have disclaimers for incredible amounts of gore and disturbing content. Obviously, the nature of any literary content is up to the author’s discretion! However, authors should still be responsible enough to put some disclaimers up when they publish such content so that a potential reader can decide for themselves if they want to to read such content. Simply, it should be a simple courtesy. *Disclaimer: Read up to chapter 16.* The plot has a steady pace and that pace is, in all honesty, slow. There are paragraphs that have “jumps of thought” where something is missing, making it difficult to follow. There are already plot holes being only at Chapter 16... Characters personally feel clunky. There are cases where the author is rather obviously using deus ex machina to fix even the simplest plot points; using them in nothing more than just basic human interactions, no less— there isnt even a weak excuse given for absurdity, its just.. there? I’m a naturally curious person who will hold on tightly to bad writing just to learn the plot, a character, some piece of world building, a slightly interesting take on a trope or what not... I want to know more about this world... but I personally won’t pursue reading it. These are my thoughts on this novel. It has more interest in creating scenes of gore and violent action than creating a story- and what I was looking for was the story.