The first arc is really good, MC shows great leadership skills, leading a bunch of mortals to clear an asylum full of demons in the impossible level difficult. But then, the author destroyed this novel in the next 10 chapters. The MC needs a medallion to enter an order of knights to recover his missing eye and arm. He finds a woman who is selling the medallion for 1000 coins, that's the amount of her debt with loan sharks. He pays her debt but is afraid of asking for the medallion to not upset her. Then he gives a blank check to corrupt city guards, just for them not make things difficult for him. The woman he saves, who lives in the slums, who divides a room with 4 people, including a dead rotten body, who would become a slave together with her daughter, gets angry at the MC because he follows her, to make sure she gets home in safety, cause she's a widow and her reputation could suffer (he still had no courage to ask for the medallion). Seeing her living conditions, the MC picks his remaining money e gives to her, so she can find a better house to live So the badass rich MC of the last arc now has no money, no balls, no medallion e needs to find a job to survive.
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I really hate it when authors bend backward to push a romantic interest. Like its not even that interesting and it shows laziness in the creative process. would he behave the same if it was a man? why do they like to make woman so weak lame and unlikeable?
Yeah my interests in this went 100% to 0% real quick because of this. just why
I thought about giving this novel a try, so anybody knows if the author fixed these issues later?
Thx u
What kind of logic is that? I was about to read this but now im not sure
