Review Detail of StormLily in I Don’t Want This Bad Ending

Overall it is a good read, there was some parts that I did not like at all. One thing that I did not like was the time skip in there. I did not even realize it was a time skip till the middle of the chapter. Also, a lot of things were left out. For example, Eve and Clabel's relationship. It mentioned that he had found out she knew about him. When and how did he find out. Also, when did she commission him about Cassandra. Things like that bothered me. However, what bothered me the most was the ending. To me it seemed rushed, and did not tie up loose ends. It actually left more questions. For example, what happened to her spirits. It said at the end that they just disappeared, and then we hear no more about them. Even in the extras that were many years later. Author, you did a good job, just some parts could have been better written to make things more clear.