Review Detail of EldritchTheDead in Sunset

Okay, not your typical story. Its not average at best but to be honest its quite eye catching. Although writing could still get an improvement and grammar too, it wasn’t bad that it would change my thoughts about it. As a fellow author, i know it’s a struggle to better yourself for the purpose of making a great story. Anyways would recommend the story to any kind of reader. Hopefully the author gets better with time so please keep writing! (P.S. dont forget to review mine hehe.)