This story is good but like many said the grammar is a problem, but in all honesty tha isn't something that will ruin a good story, we all do to some degree make grammar mistakes, so author don't let it be an hindrance, you can get better! and everyone that won't give it a try because of the grammar your missing out i tell you!
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