Review Detail of GloriouslyFamous in Sunset

It is a very interesting story and a good read. The plot is nice and smooth. The character are well made. The author has done quite well evoking the emotions of the reader. Well done, keep up the good work. The grammar has some space to improve, capitalization of the sentences, "i"s and ending sentences with full stops and some other minor stuff that could be fixed after a read over. Overall a very story, well done!