It’s obvious this author got ideas from the other Madara fanfic but this one just seems very cringe. First off, he is not like Madara at all, he only has his powers. At least in the other one you get those Madara vibes but here its just bad. He says “Because I’m Madara Uchiha” after every time someone asks him something and more. Like blah blah blah how can you do that? “Because I’m Madara Uchiha” Why are you holding a knife in class? “Because I’m Madara Uchiha” I know chapters are low but I don’t have hopes for this.

Not Madara just some cringe ass mother****er, overall the story is decent at best. Not your fault kinda hard to fully grasp a character that wasn't created by you soooo just keep up the good work and you will slowly learn how to properly mimic a character.

Let’s get to some pointers. Cons 1: Started off a little bland and cringe 2: Only focused on MC and Enji at the beginning. 3: Didn’t really describe the world well at the beginning. Pros 1: In the more recent chapters the character has grown tremendously and we actually get to see a bit of personality and ambition. 2: More recent chapters have had much better description and character growth. 3: Dosn’t absolutely crap on Izuku for no reason, while Izuku remains the same emotional wreck, he is still his intelligent analytical self. 4: MC seems to actually end his own person not Madara himself. 5: Very enjoyable fight scenes. Definitely some of my favorite in any fanfic! They are descriptive and fun! 6: Definitely my favorite fanfic

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I've loved this, but you give up. why. Whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyyyyyy

i actually haven't read past chapter 3 and i will not be going past chapter 3 . first of all their is no character development cause there's nothing to develop since i only read up until chapter 3 . second problem i have with the story is that the mc's social life was pretty much non existent , since we didn't see him talk to anyone aside from his brother. so im gonna assume he sat quietly in class , and went home afterwards without communicating with anyone. problem nr 3 the author skipped his whole life and rushed to the entrance exam arc. and he even skipped the entrance exam 😂😂. what i enjoyed about the story is the fact that we got to see the mc interact with at least one person instead of traning in a cave for 14 years 🤷‍♂️. any way keep up the good work author , and remember "it's not about getting through each and arc its about the journey" PEACE ✌🏽

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Don't know what to say except that I love this also it has Kenobi and Madara in the same ff so how could it not be amazing. ______________________________________

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A great book kind of short And I hope there is a sequal that continues it it ended abruptly but I think tHe author will do a continuationthe book had good character deVelopment to