Item: The Uchiha's in MHA 11111 (Has been moved)
Rating: 4.8
Author: Madara_Goku

Madara_GokuLv14yr

2020-08-07 10:29

Let’s get to some pointers. Cons 1: Started off a little bland and cringe 2: Only focused on MC and Enji at the beginning. 3: Didn’t really describe the world well at the beginning. Pros 1: In the more recent chapters the character has grown tremendously and we actually get to see a bit of personality and ambition. 2: More recent chapters have had much better description and character growth. 3: Dosn’t absolutely crap on Izuku for no reason, while Izuku remains the same emotional wreck, he is still his intelligent analytical self. 4: MC seems to actually end his own person not Madara himself. 5: Very enjoyable fight scenes. Definitely some of my favorite in any fanfic! They are descriptive and fun! 6: Definitely my favorite fanfic

The Uchiha's in MHA 11111 (Has been moved)

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