Review Detail of Oemar_danoes in Fated To You

The story has the potential to grow into something very impressive. I think we can see several twists in this story who know how things will work out. I like it when it's written in the first person. Prominent characters, they have great potential to evolve and be more further. The world-building is serious, but as I understand it there is no need. What's material in my eyes is the story improvement potential and the characters. I would be biased in family vehicle twists not exclusively with the main characters.