Review Detail of MoonSon in The Bloody Emissary of Justice
Review detail
Well, I confess it was more for personal taste ... The story is not bad, but particularly that whole thing of justice, that bull**** of the goddesses, is not for me. I'm not saying that I don't like fair protagonists, but just having that as an objective or even accepting all that responsibility for nothing, like nothing at all. Sure, it has the protagonist's background story, but let's be honest that what he needs is no longer responsibility, but a therapist. It seems that even after everything he went through, everything he saw, he didn’t grow into anything, didn’t learn anything and didn’t even develop ... He was stuck, static in that state since he was a child. He didn't look like an emissary from justice to me, just a traumatized and broken child, who lost a lot and got stuck in the past. As far as I read, the feelings that passed me were of pity for the protagonist and revolt by the Goddesses, to me it seemed that they were abusing a vulnerable person. From what I see, I think the author is going to develop the character in the worlds he’s going to visit, so he won’t be in that state forever and it’s probably going to be good, but this beginning was kind of discouraging, not because it’s bad, but because of the way I felt reading. I say again that this was private to me, maybe other people like it or feel different ... My personal taste, I don't mean that the story is bad or good, only those were the impressions it caused me. It may be that in the future I have motivation to read this story and if it happens I will change my review.
The Bloody Emissary of Justice
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I made Karna's nature like that. When he interacts with different people in anime worlds, when he enters into a relationship, with he becomes a father, when he starts living as himself without a purpose, those are what I intend to do. The purpose of this fanfic, the plot is to show people how a man who had a traumatic past and despite being a child has the mind of a child, this a story about how a broken child slowly transforms into a happy people as the wounds in his heart slowly heal by his interactions with others. That is the plot...
I understand that the plot of the story is this, but I can't swallow the protagonist's personality ... I understand that what happened in the past marked him, as well as shaped him, but the years have passed, there is no way for him to become what he became without interacting with someone, there is no way for him not to change, he does not develop even after all. that he went through, everything he did, everything he saw. He just remained static, stopped in time and I was also kind of disgusted with the Goddesses. Anyway, as you can see the story has minor errors, nothing condemnable, and the idea behind this story is not bad either. But I really cannot understand the protagonist, how he will develop in other worlds, since he did not develop in his ... If he didn’t give the opportunity to change in his original world, why will it happen in another? Apart from the fantastic aspects, people are still people, he has no obligation in the same way that he did not have in his world. It is the human being is a social being, there is no way he has not interacted with anyone in his original world, and if he interacted and continued like this, how will it be different in the new world? what will prevent him from interacting in the same way?
Md_Omr_Alpha:I made Karna's nature like that. When he interacts with different people in anime worlds, when he enters into a relationship, with he becomes a father, when he starts living as himself without a purpose, those are what I intend to do. The purpose of this fanfic, the plot is to show people how a man who had a traumatic past and despite being a child has the mind of a child, this a story about how a broken child slowly transforms into a happy people as the wounds in his heart slowly heal by his interactions with others. That is the plot...
You will know I record time why the Goddesses did what they had to do and Karna's personality will change over the course of the story. Anyway, let's end this discussion here, I'm gonna go sleep.
MoonSon:I understand that the plot of the story is this, but I can't swallow the protagonist's personality ... I understand that what happened in the past marked him, as well as shaped him, but the years have passed, there is no way for him to become what he became without interacting with someone, there is no way for him not to change, he does not develop even after all. that he went through, everything he did, everything he saw. He just remained static, stopped in time and I was also kind of disgusted with the Goddesses. Anyway, as you can see the story has minor errors, nothing condemnable, and the idea behind this story is not bad either. But I really cannot understand the protagonist, how he will develop in other worlds, since he did not develop in his ... If he didn’t give the opportunity to change in his original world, why will it happen in another? Apart from the fantastic aspects, people are still people, he has no obligation in the same way that he did not have in his world. It is the human being is a social being, there is no way he has not interacted with anyone in his original world, and if he interacted and continued like this, how will it be different in the new world? what will prevent him from interacting in the same way?
I agree with ur review. Why do something or accept a task when there’s nothing in return for you? For ‘justice’? Justice is bullsh*t man, especially in worlds where a person can gain so much power over others. It’s such a childish ideal from a childish MC that I don’t want to read about. I will skip this novel thanks for saving me the time.
