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seathian
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2020-11-03 05:02

i really don't understand why this has high reviews its a novel with good potential the idea of it is really great but the writing quality is horrible the pacing is weird and some of the developments aren't explained well at all

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ArkAnghel
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Thanks for the review

ArkAnghel
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Wish you can point out the lack of developements? But yeah tha ks for the review you gave but as you said it has good potential hope you can help me as I think you can be a good reader in this novel. And I amsorry for my other grammatical errors. And yeah I am honestly saying I am not proficient enough in writing.

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