Would have rated higher if the author didn’t have naruto write 50 shades of grey at the age of 3. He wants money even though with his parents he will have a ton of money just ask them forcefully somehow idk but just him writing that novel at the age of 3 is super suspicious especially since he doesn’t act like a child but a sketchy dude in a child body. Also the hokage lets him leave alone at the age of 3 outside of the village for his book? Dumb

Plot holes. ,,Plot holes. Plo,,,t holes. Plot holes. B,,,ad gram,,mar. Makes no sense.,,,,,, Retard,,,,, characters. Retard story. Author has Not enough info on Naruto.,,,,,,

Man it's a good story but you forget one thing they are only 3 years old and you are doing a horrible job in the story three years old kids can't go on talking about girlfriends and wives and making a three year old kid write an ***** novel and hiruzen says nothing even though we all know that love naruto as much as he does he is still a paranoid bastard and before you say he is a **** in his body is he a pedophile going after a three year old girl you did a horrible job in portraying the characters like hiashi and hiruzen like the concept but I don't like your story

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Fucking using gravity on the body when you 1 year old will **** the baby up. Stupid stupid stupid Stupid stupid stupid Retarded

Okay okay okay... I found the begging hardly acceptable but I thought it was still tolerable, but then as I continued reading it follows isekai Naruto as a 3 yr old who thought I need money for dates better write a book about sex.. then the 3rd hokage assumes he's a devil spawn cause he suddenly shows ability to use one of his father's signature technique and he decides Danzo is way more trustworthy than the kid who allied with the hyuga clan and kept declaring he'll marry a little girl, then there's the fact that he was able to kill a jonin level root ninja using shadow clones and explosions and he's able to run all the way to kumo as a 3 yr old... If this was Harry potter I'd understand with how retarded the wizards are.. but the shinobi literally live with lies and killing so their brains are on overdrive trying to stay alive.. so how the **** should a 3 yr old do all this?

It's my book so obviously, I am going to rate it 5 stars. But I genuinely think it is a food book and worth your time. Read this book yourself and make up your own mind.

it started of good but the author F*cked up the moment he tried to bring power scaling into this , also the characters are badly written. for people who know what to read stay away from this Shit.

Shit bruh......use grammarly or smth. Its unreadable right now. Shit bruh......use grammarly or smth. Its unreadable right now. Shit bruh......use grammarly or smth. Its unreadable right now.

It's a good story but writing quality isn't the best. Author over use of the word 'then' is really annoying. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////