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prince_awesome
prince_awesomeLv54yr
2020-08-31 11:36

it started of good but the author F*cked up the moment he tried to bring power scaling into this , also the characters are badly written. for people who know what to read stay away from this Shit.

Naruto: Reborn as Naruto

Rabin_Subedi
3.6
55 Chs

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DaoistShinobi
DaoistShinobiLv13

Thanks for the warning, but um, could you put it a little nicer? As a fellow author with a lot of haters I know that these kind of comments are very disheartening. Could you please make it more like constructive criticism in the fuTure?

4yr
prince_awesome
prince_awesomeLv5

nicer ? i didn't insult the author as a person so i don't know what your on about 🤷‍♂️. but since your an author , can you explain to me why someone would make people like hiashi, itachi(no mangekyo), shuisui(no mangekyo), 8 year old hinata , kakashi , and an 8 year old naruto KAGE LEVEL , LIKE WTF IS GOING ON .

DaoistShinobi:Thanks for the warning, but um, could you put it a little nicer? As a fellow author with a lot of haters I know that these kind of comments are very disheartening. Could you please make it more like constructive criticism in the fuTure?
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DaoistShinobi
DaoistShinobiLv13

I agree with you 100% Its just your first comment was a little overly harsh in my opion

prince_awesome:nicer ? i didn't insult the author as a person so i don't know what your on about 🤷‍♂️. but since your an author , can you explain to me why someone would make people like hiashi, itachi(no mangekyo), shuisui(no mangekyo), 8 year old hinata , kakashi , and an 8 year old naruto KAGE LEVEL , LIKE WTF IS GOING ON .
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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

Would have rated higher if the author didn’t have naruto write 50 shades of grey at the age of 3. He wants money even though with his parents he will have a ton of money just ask them forcefully somehow idk but just him writing that novel at the age of 3 is super suspicious especially since he doesn’t act like a child but a sketchy dude in a child body. Also the hokage lets him leave alone at the age of 3 outside of the village for his book? Dumb

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PikaPikachu
PikaPikachuLv1

Plot holes. ,,Plot holes. Plo,,,t holes. Plot holes. B,,,ad gram,,mar. Makes no sense.,,,,,, Retard,,,,, characters. Retard story. Author has Not enough info on Naruto.,,,,,,

4yr
Fweeee_eeee
Fweeee_eeeeLv10

Man it's a good story but you forget one thing they are only 3 years old and you are doing a horrible job in the story three years old kids can't go on talking about girlfriends and wives and making a three year old kid write an ***** novel and hiruzen says nothing even though we all know that love naruto as much as he does he is still a paranoid bastard and before you say he is a **** in his body is he a pedophile going after a three year old girl you did a horrible job in portraying the characters like hiashi and hiruzen like the concept but I don't like your story

4yr
SHAIPES
SHAIPESLv5

Reveal spoiler

4yr
LPummill3
LPummill3Lv14

Fucking using gravity on the body when you 1 year old will **** the baby up. Stupid stupid stupid Stupid stupid stupid Retarded

4yr
skulputulurubug
skulputulurubugLv14

Okay okay okay... I found the begging hardly acceptable but I thought it was still tolerable, but then as I continued reading it follows isekai Naruto as a 3 yr old who thought I need money for dates better write a book about sex.. then the 3rd hokage assumes he's a devil spawn cause he suddenly shows ability to use one of his father's signature technique and he decides Danzo is way more trustworthy than the kid who allied with the hyuga clan and kept declaring he'll marry a little girl, then there's the fact that he was able to kill a jonin level root ninja using shadow clones and explosions and he's able to run all the way to kumo as a 3 yr old... If this was Harry potter I'd understand with how retarded the wizards are.. but the shinobi literally live with lies and killing so their brains are on overdrive trying to stay alive.. so how the **** should a 3 yr old do all this?

4yr
Rabin_Subedi
Rabin_SubediAuthor

It's my book so obviously, I am going to rate it 5 stars. But I genuinely think it is a food book and worth your time. Read this book yourself and make up your own mind.

4yr
Xenoxide
XenoxideLv4

Shit bruh......use grammarly or smth. Its unreadable right now. Shit bruh......use grammarly or smth. Its unreadable right now. Shit bruh......use grammarly or smth. Its unreadable right now.

4yr
oceansage
oceansageLv4

It's a good story but writing quality isn't the best. Author over use of the word 'then' is really annoying. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

4yr
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