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Drakonous
DrakonousLv114yr
2020-08-11 14:35

I'll admit it, I'm usually not a fan of sappy romances. Yet - as a true testament to the author's ability - I actually enjoyed reading this. The synopsis makes it sound like a cliched love drama: y'know, girl meets boy, boy meets girl, and they live happily ever after. But it's not, it's surprisingly refreshing. The story has a sense of mystery, especially when it comes to the FL (Violet), but what really impressed me was the characters' developments. As the story is written from the FL and ML characters' perspectives, you can hear their thoughts, their emotions and it makes them all the human and third dimensional. Even better, Violet, despite having such a tragic childhood, isn't some meek damsel in distress. She's got guts and is feisty, though only when dealing with Luke. Like many authors, including me, there are a few grammatical errors, but that's just me nitpicking (I'm sorry author for all the corrections in the paragraph sentences, it's a habit for me to do that) and didn't derail the story at all. If you love romance or werewolves, then I'd refined this to you 100%. Even if you don't, I'd still recommend you try this and give it a shot

My Long Lost Mate

winterdaisy55
4.8
246 Chs

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winterdaisy55
winterdaisy55Author

Thanks for your review and the corrections!😂 I really appreciate it, as it will help me to fix the errors in my book. I am not really good in English, so the grammar kind of confuse me lol. I will fix it as how you told me to. Thanks!

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Drakonous
DrakonousLv11

If you have a computer you can try Grammarly. That thing is the no.1 tool for writers, right next to the thesaurus and that's because it'll detect any spelling/grammatical errors and give suggestions to fix them. And if you download the Google Chrome extension then you can fix your chapters straight from inkstone

winterdaisy55:Thanks for your review and the corrections!😂 I really appreciate it, as it will help me to fix the errors in my book. I am not really good in English, so the grammar kind of confuse me lol. I will fix it as how you told me to. Thanks!
4yr
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A 5 star review 🌟!!! If I could leave a 10 star review I would! 💜✨ I love your writing style, the story just flows so easily. I like how Violet isn't just a weak pitiful female character. She was locked up for years but she didn't lose her wits. I especially liked it when she shoved food in Luke's mouth, it was really funny😂 I just hope he won't need to wait too long before he gets his long lost mate's heart. Right, author?🤨 Also, the suspense around Violet and her mum's death, that would definitely make me want to read the book to the very last full stop😂 The book really perked up my curiosity so I'm definitely keeping it safe in my library. I really love your novel and you taught me a lot of things too😊💜✨.. So keep up the good work ✨🙌💯👍

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A wonderful gem. I really love this story and couldn't put this down until I finish reading the very last chapter. To everyone who is looking through the reviews to decide whether or not you will read it, PLEASE READ IT. I'm sure you won't regret your decision. One of the best books here in Webnovel. Thank you for this amazing story, Author. Please keep on writing and I wish you the very best.

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Nightsummer20
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This is such an amazing story. The plot gets better and better with each chapter and you will get hooked from the first chapter without any doubt. The plot is steady, neither too slow nor too fast. There are some grammatical errors but nothing to worry about. You will be too emerged into the story to notice that. I'll seriously suggest this story to all the werewolf romance lovers. Keep it up author!!

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Love this story but the chapters come out so slowly! Ugh, I so want to read the rest of this book! Great story line and development of characters.

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Lilians_dawn
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I really love this novel. I always liked reading novels about werewolves, vampires, witches etc. but this novel is a little different. The characters get time to develop they are not jumping from disasters to miracles😅 and you just see that there is real work behind the creation of the characters and the surroundings. Reading this story is like breathing. It is nice with a good flow and you can‘t stop once you started it😂 The language is also nice. I don‘t see any obvious annoying mistakes, but I‘m not a pro in english, so take this with a grain of salt😘 It is just a little sad that the chapters take a little long but the longer the wait the happier you are when a new chapter is there. Have a fun time reading

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Amazing story I impatiently await new chapters. I would suggest this story to anyone who believes in true love and that everyone has a soulmate.

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Such an interesting story...... Can't wait to see the remaining chapters, pls post soon, want to see how happy the ending would be.😍🥰 Am suspecting that the hidden enemy might be Jack or Andrew......or probably the Kiara..... I don't trust that lady. Pls am waiting to see what happens next, they should get married too soon oooo🤗

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So i haven't read it all yet, since i'd have to pay (and i'm broke, but if i wasn't, i would have spent every $ i had, reading it) It's honestly such a great read! I love slow-burn romance novels, and especially those who actually has a refreshing take on the romance part. It's unique and intriguing! Good job! <3

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