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Mahdi_Z
Mahdi_ZLv24yr
2020-07-29 05:49

Story and development of the characters are great. The author is slowly improving, and loving the road he's taking with the story. can't wait for him to find a way to break the barrier and enter the other world. keep it up <3

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Fairn
4.7
197 Chs

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Fairn
FairnAuthor

Thank you.

4yr
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Aikooo
AikoooLv2

Great work J. can't wait to see where the story goes. love the idea about the other world and all that. I noticed the character slowly getting more cold blooded and not caring, i like that.

4yr

NotTheOne
NotTheOneLv2

Love the new cover. story still as good as i left it, can't wait for more chapters man. keep up the good work and i hope this novel gets the readers it deserves.

4yr
Julio_Pansera
Julio_PanseraLv4

Amazing story with a smooth development, good character evolution, if you like monsters other words and systems you will love this novel !!!

3yr
borqueh
borquehLv12

Recommend----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

3yr
GoddessOfHentai
GoddessOfHentaiLv2

The development of the mc is great. love liz and her friends. also loved how the mom changed after getting all the stress off her shoulders, it was realistic. keep up the good work.

4yr
UncutToeNails
UncutToeNailsLv2

The author seems to be new at this. there are some parts that needs improvements, but the story and characters seem interesting, can't wait to see how it develops and how he'll grow.

4yr
glacer_blade
glacer_bladeLv4

this is a nice book with a cultivation and magic going on but its more of magic in the moment hope to see more cool stuff in cultivation and making both strong power for the mc to use

4yr
M00N1QU3_143
M00N1QU3_143Lv12

This story is great. I love the thrilling events and all those near death experiences he had. I can't wait to see what will happen to him during his stay in the academy. I love the story on how he got and keep his powers to protect everyone who's important to him. Please keep on giving us a very creative and unique plot for the story. Keep up the good work.

3yr
ken_ringdomstory
ken_ringdomstoryLv1

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.

4yr
Navigator
NavigatorLv2

Amazing work for a new author. i thought this type of story is used too much but you slowly started to change it and it has a different feel than the rest of them. great work. recommended.

4yr
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