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Review Detail of RenuKakkar in Runners Survivors

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RenuKakkar
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This story holds the readers attention from the first chapter itself. I read 10 chapter that have been published so far. I love Science fiction. Now, my honest review and suggestions:- The Stability of updated is good as 34 chapters have already been published. The story is developing well and seems to be for teenagers as can be gauged from the first 10 chapters. The character design is good. The description of some of the main characters has been given in the first two chapters. The world back ground need to be detailed a little. I feel that the setting of the novel seems to be a futuristic world where criminals are the rulers. Humans have been reduced to being scavengers, as can be seen by the tattered clothes of the teenagers. The author may like to explore the addition of a few paras to this effect in the first two chapters. The writing has a few mistakes in typo and in the sentences which do not interfere with the story. I would really like to know how the novel progress and will visit it later on to read more chapters. All the best, Author!

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Runners Survivors

DaisukiDayoSenpai

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
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Thank you for your review ^ ^ And yes, it would all be slowly explained as the chapter goes. I decided to write this with the thought of following MC’s perspective so the readers would only know the details through his dialogues ^ ^ Sorry for the typos >~< I rush-typed ten chapters on one day to upload chap 2-10 the next day. I’m still going through my earlier chapters to smoothen things out. And once again, thank you so much for your support ^^ I hope you continue enjoying this book :)) Have a great day!