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dizzydreamer24
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2020-09-11 03:05

since I am a super-duper-mega avid fan of The Alchemist I am all eyes with this novel I understand the story pacing because the author is trying to explain and introduce the characters whereas for those who are already familiar felt it's kinda slow especially for people like me who cant put a good book down till its over. somehow in this book you would think of thousand of ways how Fae will finally knows the truth about her real self and how would her relationship with Ren materializes knowing now that conflicts are now beginning to show just proves that there's more in store for its readers....Happy reading everyone and to our dear author - Good luck and more awesome ideas to you!

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Missrealitybites
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Aww.. Thank you!!! I can't wait to share more chapters about Ren and Vega. It's bound to be another rollercoaster ride (which I think you are used to by now ^.^). Thank you for this review, the continuous support and encouragement. luv ya!!!

dizzydreamer24
dizzydreamer24Lv14

I am indeed excited for the ride... I am in support of all your beautiful novels and so much grateful for sharing your talent...❤❤❤

Blue_Berry215
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I love this so far

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QUEEN_CheChe
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(WARNING:ONLY FOR THOSE WHO ENDED READING THIS NOVEL.THIS REVIEW MIGHT SPOIL YOUR READING) Author,please,please,pleaseeeeeeeee🙏🙏🙏 Just make another version of Vega's story which she and Ren would end up.I know many of readers hate Ren and also I also hate Ren from the beginning of the story but I slowly end up wanting them to be pair up.At first I also liked Vega being with Mischa but as the story kept on and on I started to understand how Ren was also suffering.Imagine when you want revenge but end up getting in love with the woman who'm killed your father and uncle??????Everyone deserves second chance also same for Ren Right????…As for the fact that Ren and Vega met in chapter 328-332 of course they would somehow became stranger cause they didn't knew each other right???And Mischa was closed from Vega right from the start cause he is her father's foster son,and of course they would not act like stranger and of course Mischa and Vega are both stranger when Vega doesn't remember anything there wasn't also Sparks OK or maybe I'm just bias(T_T)………Although Charles/Karl,Ren and Amelia are sinful but all were blinded by hatred.Amelia blinded by love(she just loved Ren so much she even let Ren use her even if she knew Ren would never loved him),Charles changes cause of his brother and of course lastly—Ren became like this because of the what happened to his parents which died in painful and unjustifice way……EVERYONE PLEASE TRY TO UNDERSTAND THEM if your in their shoes!!!!!You would also blinded by HATRED of course!!!!…I've done this review cause I kept crying.LOL,after finishing this novel.It really breaks my heart upon knowing that they wouldn't end up being together.Promise I really cryied all day that my mother kept teasing me because I'm such a crybaby… ‼️‼️HOPE YOU NOTICE THIS AUTHOR missreallybites‼️‼️ from this anonymous reader

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