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QUEEN_CheChe
QUEEN_CheCheLv33yr
2021-04-18 15:56

(WARNING:ONLY FOR THOSE WHO ENDED READING THIS NOVEL.THIS REVIEW MIGHT SPOIL YOUR READING) Author,please,please,pleaseeeeeeeee🙏🙏🙏 Just make another version of Vega's story which she and Ren would end up.I know many of readers hate Ren and also I also hate Ren from the beginning of the story but I slowly end up wanting them to be pair up.At first I also liked Vega being with Mischa but as the story kept on and on I started to understand how Ren was also suffering.Imagine when you want revenge but end up getting in love with the woman who'm killed your father and uncle??????Everyone deserves second chance also same for Ren Right????…As for the fact that Ren and Vega met in chapter 328-332 of course they would somehow became stranger cause they didn't knew each other right???And Mischa was closed from Vega right from the start cause he is her father's foster son,and of course they would not act like stranger and of course Mischa and Vega are both stranger when Vega doesn't remember anything there wasn't also Sparks OK or maybe I'm just bias(T_T)………Although Charles/Karl,Ren and Amelia are sinful but all were blinded by hatred.Amelia blinded by love(she just loved Ren so much she even let Ren use her even if she knew Ren would never loved him),Charles changes cause of his brother and of course lastly—Ren became like this because of the what happened to his parents which died in painful and unjustifice way……EVERYONE PLEASE TRY TO UNDERSTAND THEM if your in their shoes!!!!!You would also blinded by HATRED of course!!!!…I've done this review cause I kept crying.LOL,after finishing this novel.It really breaks my heart upon knowing that they wouldn't end up being together.Promise I really cryied all day that my mother kept teasing me because I'm such a crybaby… ‼️‼️HOPE YOU NOTICE THIS AUTHOR missreallybites‼️‼️ from this anonymous reader

The Prince Who Cannot Fall In Love & The Missing Heiress

Missrealitybites
4.8
357 Chs

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QUEEN_CheChe
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I stopped writting this review because I felt like it's too long so I will just comment.Author PLEASEEEE make another volume which Ren and Vega would end up.Even if it is only 3-4 chaps.I also suggest that you changed the sypnosis and titled IF Vega and mischa would end up(although I know that they would really end up being together) because I don't want readers like me give false hope of Vega being with Ren.I heard this from other novel that—"Deceit and lies are beautiful, Reality are ugly" and it's true because even if I know that it might be already in alchemist that Vega and Mischa would end up together but as I can say—lies are really beautiful.(T~T)

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Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesAuthor

Thank you so much for writing down your heartfelt thoughts about Ren and this book. I really appreciate it. I am not sure I can write an alternate ending. It will be interesting to do. But, I cannot promise that I can do it. Another way that I can offer is probably to give Ren his own happy ending, when he met another woman that understands where he came from, accepts him, and loves him unconditionally. And together, they could fall in love and build a family. Would you like that?

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Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesAuthor

Ahaha.. You are a sweetheart. If it's only a few 3-4 chapters, maybe I can do something.

QUEEN_CheChe:I stopped writting this review because I felt like it's too long so I will just comment.Author PLEASEEEE make another volume which Ren and Vega would end up.Even if it is only 3-4 chaps.I also suggest that you changed the sypnosis and titled IF Vega and mischa would end up(although I know that they would really end up being together) because I don't want readers like me give false hope of Vega being with Ren.I heard this from other novel that—"Deceit and lies are beautiful, Reality are ugly" and it's true because even if I know that it might be already in alchemist that Vega and Mischa would end up together but as I can say—lies are really beautiful.(T~T)
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QUEEN_CheChe
QUEEN_CheCheLv3

Thank You author for noticing this nobody 😭😭😭😭😭😭

Missrealitybites:Ahaha.. You are a sweetheart. If it's only a few 3-4 chapters, maybe I can do something.
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Missrealitybites
MissrealitybitesAuthor

😂😂😘

QUEEN_CheChe:Thank You author for noticing this nobody 😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Missrealitybites
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Hello, this is the author. This book is the sequel to my first novel "The Alchemists". It's a trilogy about immortals who live in the modern world. You don't have to read that book to understand this one, but if you did, I am sure you will feel entertained as it contains fluffy romance, secret identities, face slapping scenes, handsome and doting MLs, caring and loving FLs, and most importantly, a supportive family. The Prince & The Lost Heiress is going to be a bit dark, because it's a story about revenge and redemption, but I promise to make it worth your while. Synopsis: The world's most feared assassin had turned over a new leaf. But his past came back to haunt him. Since he had killed so many people, one of his victims was out to seek revenge, but taking away his most precious daughter. Will she be able to return to her doting family? Will they catch who was behind the abduction? Who is actually the mastermind?

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dizzydreamer24
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since I am a super-duper-mega avid fan of The Alchemist I am all eyes with this novel I understand the story pacing because the author is trying to explain and introduce the characters whereas for those who are already familiar felt it's kinda slow especially for people like me who cant put a good book down till its over. somehow in this book you would think of thousand of ways how Fae will finally knows the truth about her real self and how would her relationship with Ren materializes knowing now that conflicts are now beginning to show just proves that there's more in store for its readers....Happy reading everyone and to our dear author - Good luck and more awesome ideas to you!

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emeryeks22
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i always give this book a rating of 5 coz its just soooo perfect. from the story development character design updating of chapters to the quality of writing and world background...wow...i couldn't say anything more. just superb!

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Pena_aQuina
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It is recommended, note it! this book must be included in the library. Submitting a neat story and an interesting plot. I'm addicted to keep reading. Author's spirit 💪😁🥰

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Manfred_R
Manfred_RLv10

I love how this book focuses on my favorite family. Alaric and Aleksis are couple goals!! I do hope their daughter will find a man who will cherish her like her father does her mother.

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MangoDuckie
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Love the story line. I read all of the other book 940 Chapters. Now I want to find out what happens to Vega. I need updates! Bad thing about about beening a speed reader is I finish before the book has been complete. Ugh personal problems. :)

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GodOfNihilism
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This book is really high rated so I was expecting some Psychic's Scarlet Dream level of writing or that level of story or characters. I can't help but feel disappointed. That said, it is a good book without a shred of doubt and I am going to continue following it as it progresses.

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Aleksandria
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I love this book. This is the sequel of The Prince. I recognized many lovable characters immediately. I hope Vega will end up with Mischa. Please hear me, author... ❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Gldseya
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This story is to make you addicted. You can feel the emotions of this story. I love the story. I’ll always be waiting for the next chapter. Keep the spirit thor 😊😍

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