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incognitoyy
incognitoyyLv44yr
2020-08-29 10:53

I think you should continue the fic and you should probably give mc a bigger 🧠/iq.now in the name of eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp I shall spam exp oops I aready did.

Journey of my Path[Moved]

UchihaFanatic
4.1
46 Chs

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UchihaFanatic
UchihaFanaticAuthor

ay thx for the review. Tho idk I'll try to make him smarter but personally I'm pretty re tarded and am a du-mbass at times so...

4yr
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Taonsup
TaonsupLv4

I wondering if i should like the author’s comment but would that be offensive?

4yr
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Your_FBI_Agent
Your_FBI_AgentLv13

UchihaFanatic:ay thx for the review. Tho idk I'll try to make him smarter but personally I'm pretty re tarded and am a du-mbass at times so...
4yr
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Vryssix_Vorithion
Vryssix_VorithionLv4

Both, both are good. Unlike Life questions.

Taonsup:I wondering if i should like the author’s comment but would that be offensive?
2yr
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DearCompanion
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He is stronger than azazel by large margin but he's willing to be ordered around by azazel doing stupid stuffs and he even said to yasaka "I'm ordered by governor azazel" "I'm representative of azazel" just stop this stupid sh*t.

4yr
DaoistdPRyQH
DaoistdPRyQHLv1

love the start just make him the strongest and get him to slap face everyone and collect girls like pokemon. Why the hell would he train him when he has all their skillset,experience and a suitable body to fight? Plus the guy is handsome —> HAREM ROUTE

4yr
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

Reveal spoiler

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Avarice_of_Greed
Avarice_of_GreedLv12

I'm only here to say one thing: I don't care about this fanfic at all, all I'm here is to support the author and say that he should focus more on his Naruto and Atg fanfic. reasons: 1. All three of authors fanfics are all Naruto related meaning he knows his naruto. He could finish his Naruto fanfic quicker. 2. Author said he doesn't really know the plot of dxd apart from the animes. Meaning he woukd get stuck writing since he doesn't know the story. 3. Why are u still reading u already know I want more of the Naruto and Atg fics.

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Blazing_moon
Blazing_moonLv14

Sometimes i think how a retard can even write so much bullshit, i know the you are not the most intelligent ones of our race, but come on this is basic.

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ObamaUchiha
ObamaUchihaLv4

meh it's a harem which i dont like and the mc does basically nothing filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler filler

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Unpaid_FoxGod
Unpaid_FoxGodLv14

could have been good honestly, i find this kind of story where mc should not hide their true power but nah mc goes "lets hide it"or smthing could have been grate but not my slice of pie

3yr
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