Item: Termina: Life in the undeground
Rating: 5
Author: DAOIST222222

DAOIST222222Lv24yr

2020-09-29 23:49

Writing quality is amazing. Story development is so good and nice. Character design is also cool. Stability I dunno wat to say. World background is perfecto

Termina: Life in the undeground

Pwnzer

5.0

82 Chs

Liked by 1 people

Replies3

PwnzerAuthor

Stability is non existent, you don't have to mince your words. Thanks for the review.

4yr

DAOIST222222Lv2

By stability I meant update stability. I don't know how to review that, sorry. But thanx for chaps.

Pwnzer:Stability is non existent, you don't have to mince your words. Thanks for the review.

4yr

PwnzerAuthor

Usually stability is how often or how well a series keeps to it's schedule. This one as a general rule is more of a chapter every two days which for some is unstable. One could argue it's simply my schedule but there are times when the delay becomes greater than a single day. I didn't take it as an insult or anything so no need to apologise.

DAOIST222222:By stability I meant update stability. I don't know how to review that, sorry. But thanx for chaps.

4yr

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