Item: Termina: Life in the undeground
Rating: 5
Author: THE_TORMENTOR

THE_TORMENTORLv104yr

2020-08-11 14:45

Hey hey Pwnzer, it is I The Tormentor~!!!!! Coming here to drop this review to get this story going. Isn't this normally the authors job? But oh well lets get this started. This story is about a kid who's sent to a parallel earth where the planet got nuked and beast rule the world and humans hide under ground like the worms the great monster think they are. That is until the mc switches with his parallel self and kills a monster, gets experimented on and... We'll see about that later. Oh and they're are others like the mc who have powers called exalted and live above ground and fight the monsters

Termina: Life in the undeground

Pwnzer

5.0

82 Chs

Liked by 11 people

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PwnzerAuthor

Thanks for this. I don't like giving myself reviews or anything like that in general (although I am rank one in power stones...)

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THE_TORMENTORLv10

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Pwnzer:Thanks for this. I don't like giving myself reviews or anything like that in general (although I am rank one in power stones...)

4yr

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