I tried reading this story 3 times and 3 times I gave up. The story doesn't seem to be particularly bad and even has many unique and original elements which are a joy to read. Sadly for me the interactions and way of thinking of the author are just too childish and frankly outright cringe. Its not even a bad type of cringe just one that speaks of immaturity and... maybe lower intelligence. It really isn't that the story is bad or that the author sucks at writing, even the story line is good, its just the small stuff like interactions and the MC's thought process that is just very simple and weak.
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