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Driftingleaf
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Frankly, I like the story. Beautiful world, good idea, and character. Simply put a gem in the rough. But seriously if she is going to be a coward all the time😪 I can't help but find it frustrating and difficult to enjoy. I understand very well the importance of chara development and that you want her to overcome her trauma slowly but you don't change if you don't try to. Let me ask you did you think that someone that had a trauma about a subject will get better just by simply avoiding it? (in this case, it's straight denial and nothing get better that way). In case of bullying, the more you give in the more the bully will ask for. Even if she doesn't become a superwoman out of anywhere she needs to show the will to overcome it and not just take things like this. I just hope you understand that it's more difficult to build a character temperament than to build it power. Even more in the style you are taking its clear we aren't in a quest for power but a quest for the mc betterment. I'm no expert and don't know your draft but I just hope not to see another good novel drop. Hope you don't take it badly.

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Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination

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