Promises were made. Disappointed. Railed in halves. Skinned alive. Such a hellscape this is. Hanged in the middle of nowhere. Such a waste of words.

I originally went to read thinking'oh alien arbiter from halo 3, that's interesting....' Nope. Not him but still good so far, although most of it so far is just from the original ln. So to say that is a bit pointless but from what he put in so far it looks potentially promising. But it is a major downer that there is no real Arbiter....sigh. Nostalgia killed.

I will do the best in my powers and try to make it into a good fanfic. And I Have already planned out the character development ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++;+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++;+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I believe many like overlord story. And fanfic about it is very much appreciated. Thank you for your hard work. I hope you could take this fanfic to a level closer to its original or even better. Harsh criticism will be your everyday reading. Dont give up. Many will wait upon your work. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

It's a good story was expecting a little more change than what's happening but still a good read................ ........... .

A good overlord fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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A shameless 5 star just for the symphosis. It was brutally honest and I like that very very much. The symphosis itself made me smile. ......

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