It had a confusing start and for me it only got more confusing. This novel has great potential it's not 'bad' it's just not to my certain tastes in a novel.
Oh, the start was confusing? Could you please elaborate on that? What made it more confusing? I'm sorry if it's not to your tastes, but I'd like to see what I can improve so in the future, I can write much better! ^^