The book is better than decent, but it could improve. There are problems prevalent in this that are prevalent in many books in this particular genre, that being numbers having little-to-no weight, as well as some descriptions being more tell than show. Other than that, I vibes with it.
Tamaki_Leon
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LIKETamaki_Leon:Thank you so much for the review! As much as I know how prevalent many books are in this particular genre, I'll my best to improve and get a good plot rolling :3
Fern_is_Plant:I actually vibes with the plot, dear Author. Do work to improve, and godspeed.