Review Detail of Unchainedx in The X-Gene of Fate

I started reading this novel a while ago, i really like of DC and Marvel universes, so i liked of the novel very quickly, it wasn't the best fanfic I had ever read, but i liked it a lot and in my opinion the novel had great potential, the protagonist was intelligent, he had talent, he had courage and his personality was changing over time, some things for better others not so much, but it is something rare in fanfics, the main character was evolving as a person, it was very interesting to see how much he changed while living with the servants. However, the author was not feeling comfortable with the progress of the story and decided to "rewrite" it, i honestly didn't care much, i found his attitude of trying to improve and further develop his work very admirable, but honestly ... I don't see evolution, writingquality still good, but the idea is poorly executed, the main character is ... weak, i'm not talking about strength, i mean personality, the old character was a child, but i never felt that he was "weak" , what i mean is that the personality of this "new" character is pathetic, it's like he doesn't exist, he's a blank board: He's not smart, he's not talented, he's not strong, he's not funny, he's not brave(he is a coward), he is simply not pleasant to read, he has no quality as a protagonist. I didn't understand his relationship with Liz in the first chapter, that was meaningless ... In the other version you wrote 60 chapters and there was nothing romantic or sexual, there were some clues, but nothing that big, everything was smoother, apparently the approach of the "harem" tag will be more aggressive too ... I know it's too early to do a review, but honestly, i've read too many novels and i know how it will end, i don't want to offend you, i really liked your first work and i gave ** whenever i could, but ... This continuation made me very sad .