Review Detail of amaturewriter in Bleach DxD: Tri-King Kazui

Hello~ thank you for reviewing on this story. I'll try answer those statements you have as best as I can. 1. He's not in middle school. I don't think I have to say much more but I never said he was in middle school, never did I mention middle school in the whole 4000+ words in the chapter. He's 1-A as in 1st year of high school, he's literally a single year behind Issei. Making him a kouhai of the whole bunch of characters in the series except for Koneko. 2. Your comparing characters with Ichigo who a main character and creme of the crop in every bloodline he has. He's supposed to be strong, and you're downplaying DxD too much. Serafall has enough ice powers to match a captain-level Toshiro pre-TYBW, other abilities? Not so much. By sheer super powers (which the DxD world relies in) some of them are pretty strong but overall, Bleachverse reckts. 3. I'm technically going to separate the 2 world's, but in a way that's supposed to be. See, most of the Bleach characters are souls and are dead, so I can use that fact to separate the world in between the Living Realm and the Spirit Realm. The Soul King is the de facto Christian God equivalent of the spiritual realm. As you can read, Almighty referred to Ophis as the living realm version of Pernida. Pernida (Progress) Ophis (Infinity) See what I did there? 4. I'm sure most people run over this fact but Ichigo almost never leaves Karakura. Add the fact that after TYBW he's technically kicking back and relaxing because the big bad threat is gone he usually wouldn't bother to learn more than he needs to. In other words, Ichigo didn't really teach Kazui as much, he thought him enough but not all. Ichigo always wanted a normal life and he did all that he did because he wants to protect his friends, now that everything is peaceful why would he bother learning about Devil's and **** when they're not really going to bother Karakura? Remember that the Shinto only gave them rule over Kuoh. 5. He's not weak but he's not really using his all. He refuses to accept his Zanpaktou (and we know you can do that because of CFYOW) and because of that he can't use all his powers which would require a Shikai. Ichigo also most likely would want for his son to live life with a bit of normalcy and that's why Kazui keeps it a secret that he trains with Uryu. He doesn't really have official training is Zankensoki and more second hand knowledge from Ichika and some reapers he comes across. Plus if we're going to be technical, he's more Fullbring than anything, his Shinigami bloodline isn't as strong as Ichigo and he wasn't a Pure blood Quincy. But! In the end of the manga, there was this part of Yhwach that he unintentionally did something with. I made it so that he instead absorbs that and bonded with his soul, just like how the hollow of masaki became Ichigo's Zanpaktou, that Yhwach became his. And we know how those works. Just like Zangetsu being annoying and hollow-ish while wanting the best for Ichigo, Almighty is being Yhwach-ish while wanting the best for Kazui. I hope that helps clears stuff.