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AlucardiaLv44yr
2020-08-15 10:33

Not sure why this is rated to high it's quite decent but common and not unique from what I've read. It has quite a lot of capitalization errors but the English is readable and better then a lot I've read. Just to really summon it up, it's an average story with a guys dying getting reincarnated into a parallel him? or just another guy with the same name as him in another universe with a system granting him powers in the beginning then having him have to do missions to get points to get more. Anyways this is just my opinion, best of luck to the author

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Adam_AAuthor

Thanks for your opinion

Adam_AAuthor

Thanks for your opinion

AlucardiaLv4

No problem, not saying its bad just feels to common on this site. Hope I didn't offend

Adam_A:Thanks for your opinion
Adam_AAuthor

I take constructive criticism and not haters, you weren't rude so๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Alucardia:No problem, not saying its bad just feels to common on this site. Hope I didn't offend
AlucardiaLv4

Cool, but I will say even though it was common all the other ones I've read with similar settings never really went close to 100 chapters, some might have don't truly remember them all, so if you keep it up and keep writing I'm sure it might stand out to those similar

Adam_A:I take constructive criticism and not haters, you weren't rude so๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Adam_AAuthor

Thanks, i will try

Alucardia:Cool, but I will say even though it was common all the other ones I've read with similar settings never really went close to 100 chapters, some might have don't truly remember them all, so if you keep it up and keep writing I'm sure it might stand out to those similar
LossutraLv4

Bro It's not readable to me at least.

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