Review Detail of DaoistDcSh9C in please reset the booktitle Quartermaster 20231218092329 28

The story seems similar to the anime Gate, but the difference is that they were from a far away planet. The grammar is somewhat confusing sometimes. The story js interesting but you need to slow down a little, the story seem to be progressing too fast. Add something like description or character innrr monolouge or something use to fill the chapter.