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DaoistDcSh9C

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  • DaoistDcSh9C
    DaoistDcSh9C3yr
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    Your story has a big platform. It can grow /expand in seemingly interesting way - in short world building. The settings is good too. I like it

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    please reset the booktitle Quartermaster 20231218092329 28
    Fantasy · Quartermaster
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  • DaoistDcSh9C
    DaoistDcSh9C3yr
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    The story seems similar to the anime Gate, but the difference is that they were from a far away planet. The grammar is somewhat confusing sometimes. The story js interesting but you need to slow down a little, the story seem to be progressing too fast. Add something like description or character innrr monolouge or something use to fill the chapter.

    altalt
    please reset the booktitle Quartermaster 20231218092329 28
    Fantasy · Quartermaster
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