Review Detail of yokedjaguar in My Adventures In The Multiverse

Theirs nothing good about this at all. Even if you like OP mc's, this has no plot. 10 chapters of nothing but him messing with the system, then when the story finally starts its him being a retard, everything is overly dramatic, this is going past wish fulfillment, this is an author that doesn't know what their doing and wanted the basic cliche bullsh*t of harem, system, and op. That's fine but when you do all that and don't add anything else that's your own besides a sprinkling of bad grammar your gonna get a nice serving of dog sh*t. May seem harsh but when you write a story you have to have at least the basics down and quite frankly I haven't even seen that. I hope if you write another story you think about what your gonna write, make it your own (even if it's terrible puns), your grammar is better, and you don't ride on every cliche to get a free pass to the top and if you do make it good not whatever this is.