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nerdSupreme14
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I have not read a lot of this, however I don’t t think I like it. This man’s motivation is weird, he wants to cultivate to get strength and seems to attribute every problem of his to “being to weak” like he for real says that about anything. Also the dialogue is wack and they talk like they’re in modern era. Also, and my biggest problem with this is that he doesnt have enough hate in his heart, going back to his weak motivation. It seems very choppy like his motivation is rarely brought up and you cant really feel his hate for Heaven. He wants to gain strength because Heaven created his best friend with a short life span and because of this he wants to gain strength so no one can do anything like that again. STUPID! And his dad the so called “Opposer” heavens equal could do nothing, really 🙄. Like how can you match Heaven in a fight and not in anything else. The character designs also came of as lackluster and very lazy, but that might just be attributed to the overall rushed pace in the beginning.

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Cobra03
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Based on your review, it seems like you did not read many chapters at all, otherwise you would not have said most of that stuff. You seem to forget that Gravis is just a kid at the beginning of the story. Did you expect a kid that had never even come into contact with cultivation before to know what would best motivate him for the rest of his life? Because if so, let me tell you, that is not how life works. As for the "they talk like they're in modern era" part, do you even realize that this is a FANTASY novel? Are there some rules that dictate what manner of speaking is allowed to exist in a novel? His father couldn't do anything about his friend exactly because he IS equal to Heaven. His friend was created by Heaven as a specific being that just dies very young. Heaven didn't break any rules, and she just died when her time had run out. And even though the Opposer couldn't do anything about her specifically, he DID take revenge by killing billions of people that Heaven needed. Lastly, if you think that all novels are half-baked with every character having their personality set from the very beginning, let me inform you of a certain (legendary for you) thing called "Character Development".

nerdSupreme14
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You’d think his powerlesness at being able to do nothing to stop the death of his best friend would be enough to motivate him. But yeah I didn’t read a lot because that turned me off. About the talking while there are no rules it felt like I was reading more like an urban life or magical realism rather an eastern fantasy.

Cobra03:Based on your review, it seems like you did not read many chapters at all, otherwise you would not have said most of that stuff. You seem to forget that Gravis is just a kid at the beginning of the story. Did you expect a kid that had never even come into contact with cultivation before to know what would best motivate him for the rest of his life? Because if so, let me tell you, that is not how life works. As for the "they talk like they're in modern era" part, do you even realize that this is a FANTASY novel? Are there some rules that dictate what manner of speaking is allowed to exist in a novel? His father couldn't do anything about his friend exactly because he IS equal to Heaven. His friend was created by Heaven as a specific being that just dies very young. Heaven didn't break any rules, and she just died when her time had run out. And even though the Opposer couldn't do anything about her specifically, he DID take revenge by killing billions of people that Heaven needed. Lastly, if you think that all novels are half-baked with every character having their personality set from the very beginning, let me inform you of a certain (legendary for you) thing called "Character Development".
Cobra03
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Obviously, it does motivate him. You can see that just from the fact that the answer to his father's question as to why he wants power has changed. It's literally in the same chapter.

nerdSupreme14:You’d think his powerlesness at being able to do nothing to stop the death of his best friend would be enough to motivate him. But yeah I didn’t read a lot because that turned me off. About the talking while there are no rules it felt like I was reading more like an urban life or magical realism rather an eastern fantasy.
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the dialogue is only like that because it was written in English, most Eastern fantasy novel is first written in Chinese then translated to English

nerdSupreme14:You’d think his powerlesness at being able to do nothing to stop the death of his best friend would be enough to motivate him. But yeah I didn’t read a lot because that turned me off. About the talking while there are no rules it felt like I was reading more like an urban life or magical realism rather an eastern fantasy.