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ronel_franko
ronel_frankoLv44yr
2020-10-09 15:42

sorry to say it but again a bad story bean pick up again there nothing we can do about the good novels that was not pick up maybe next week we will have a good story will be pick up with this story will go under the rank of 200 soon :(

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JKingSniper
JKingSniperLv6

boo

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ronel_frankoLv4

yes boohooo

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JKingSniperLv6

boohoo

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