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Look overall this story had so much potential. Based on the idea of the dragon gate anything could become a dragon. However, right off the bat we see problems propping up. In the beginning MC Silk Farmer accidentally eats poison and sleeps w/ FMC. Obviously she’s so BEAUTIFUL and a Virgin and she’s now tainted or whatever cause MC is low class. But they escape. The escape was ehh. FMC is supposed to be some super talented conqueror or whateva but she useless. Next introduce stereotypical love rival. And MC pretends to be a servant to FMC. Love rival asks questions to check if MC is really a servant , so he asks about dragons. MC obviously replies. Here’s the thing though, throughout this entire time we’ve had to piece together small pieces of the past MC’s life. And while that’s not bad as a mysterious plot element, it’s poorly executed and leaves the story feeling jagged and disjointed. Later on we find MC was a super talent cause of course he was but his dragon regressed into silk worm I guess. Etc etc. either way tons of plot holes. Tldr: stereotypical plot with stereotypical chaRacters and below subpar execution. Could’ve been really good if they just built up things better. Read if you can turn off your brain and just suspend disbelief CONSTANTLY

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